Waves of birds fly
Up in the sky
I don’t know why
Frozen in flight
The rain comes down
Heading to town
Spinning around
Sleeping tonight
Remnants of dreams
Laughing moonbeams
Not what it seems
Answer is bright
Drifting to earth
Another birth
For what it’s worth
Far out of sight
Sparkling ice caves
Blinded by waves
Forgotten graves
Seeing the light
Never ending
Always bending
What is trending
The lockdown plight
Written for Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie Saturday Mix Lucky Dip hosted by weejars aka Sarah where she reached into her mystery bag and pulled out a Rhupunt.
I like this one Jim 🙂
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Thanks Nima. I based it loosely off of an old Grateful Dead song which I wrote about the other day ‘What’s Become of the Baby’, but sadly hardly nobody read that post.
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Ohh is it? Still live on your blog?
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https://jimadamsauthordotcom.wordpress.com/2020/05/15/from-primal-gold-fantasy-petals-that-fall/
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Love this Jim!
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Thanks Peter as I had a lot of fun writing it.
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You did a good job with this poem. It’s a keeper.
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Thanks Li and I like rhyming poetry.
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Very apt poem
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Thanks Glyn.
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Well done, Jim!
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Thank you Punam.
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You are welcome.
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Great job with the Rhupunt! Yours had a real flow. This is a new form for me too! Thanks for joining in the Saturday Mix
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Thank you Sarah. What did you think of my Lucky Dip logo?
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I liked it! Like a mystery box! Which is essentially what the lucky dip is…
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You should use it on your Lucky Dip posts which I always find to be so much fun.
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