All his teeth were brown
And his eyes were gray
He went for a walk
On a winter’s day
A storm is coming
He should have stayed in L.A.
His brain was screamin’
On that winter’s day
Stopped in to a bar he passed along the way
He ordered drinks for all
He decided to stay
He likes his beer real cold
Some drunk puked on him
He said, “you know you’re gonna pay”
His brain was screamin’
On that winter’s day
All his teeth were brown
And his eyes were gray
His phone started to ring
On that winter’s day
He heard her heels clip-clop
As she made her way
He had to tell her
He was leaving today
A hiccup in his plan
His brain was screamin’
On that winter’s day
A storm is coming on such a winter’s day
Written for Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie Saturday Mix – Sound Bite, November 23 2019 hosted by weejars aka Sarah where she asks us to use three onomatopoeic words, those being ring, clip-clop and hiccup.”
Very clever Jim.
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Other than the brown teeth, he was a real likable guy.
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That was fun!
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Yes all in fun, except for when the drunk puked on him. Nasty stuff.
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Creative use of the omatopaiea (sp?) prompts, Jim.
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Thanks Li. This was the most fun that I had in a while writing a post.
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You’re welcome.
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The teeth are a dealbreaker! 😂
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So even if he was a real nice guy with a good sense of humor, and a superb body, the brown teeth would make it a no go.
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Exactly! If he has all those other things going for him, dental care is a must! 😀
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That would probably be a deal breaker for me too!
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One of my absolute favorite songs! We played this in band when I was in high school and I had a french horn solo. Close to my heart!
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I wish that I would have learned how to play a musical instrument.
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I loved it & was good. Should have pursued it as a career. Joined the Marine Corps instead. What was I thinking? 😳
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